Monday 3 June 2013

CRAFTING AN EFFECTIVE WRITER

Week4/Journal writing1/Attempt2

1. A young girl with beautiful long red hair who seems to be a foreign student is sitting on the bench that locates right opposite the spectacular mosaic of a historical scene and gaping on.
2. A big angry man in a blue-orange uniform that stands out sharply against a grey mass is walking along the subway train and asking passengers to leave it.
3. A tall handsome brunet in a black wool coat whose face exudes optimism and frivolity is reading something in his i-phone and smiling.
4. Although she seems to be very weak, an old lady with the grey tired face and an absurb pink hat is pulling the big shopper on wheels along.
5. In spite of coming passengers a big dark-brown dog with smart eyes is sitting in front of the door and waiting for a station.
6. Everybody were suprised when he entered the underground train carring an enormous bass viol.

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