CRAFTING AN EFFECTIVE WRITER

Week4/Journal writing2

1. A young girl with beautiful long red hair who seems to be a foreign student is sitting on the bench that locates right opposite the spectacular mosaic of a historical scene and gaping on.
2. Amazed at the artist's work, she notices nothing around her.
3. A big angry man in a blue-orange uniform that stands out sharply against a grey mass is walking along the subway train and asking passengers to leave it.
4. A tall handsome brunet in a black wool coat whose face exudes optimism and frivolity is reading something in his i-phone and smiling.
5. Although she seems to be very weak, an old lady with the grey tired face and an absurb pink hat is pulling the big shopper on wheels along.
6. In spite of coming passengers a big dark-brown dog with smart eyes, German shepherd, is sitting in front of the door and waiting for a station.
7. Everybody were suprised when he entered the underground train carring an enormous bass viol.
8. To get unforgettable experience, they decided to spend a part of wedding ceremony in the subway.
9. This was a special day. Everybody laughted and wished them all the best.
10. To suevive in the subway, every morning they uses to put on a screen of indifference.
11. A couple, holding hands and kissing, is escalating.

CRAFTING AN EFFECTIVE WRITER

Week4/Journal writing1/Attempt2

1. A young girl with beautiful long red hair who seems to be a foreign student is sitting on the bench that locates right opposite the spectacular mosaic of a historical scene and gaping on.
2. A big angry man in a blue-orange uniform that stands out sharply against a grey mass is walking along the subway train and asking passengers to leave it.
3. A tall handsome brunet in a black wool coat whose face exudes optimism and frivolity is reading something in his i-phone and smiling.
4. Although she seems to be very weak, an old lady with the grey tired face and an absurb pink hat is pulling the big shopper on wheels along.
5. In spite of coming passengers a big dark-brown dog with smart eyes is sitting in front of the door and waiting for a station.
6. Everybody were suprised when he entered the underground train carring an enormous bass viol.

CRAFTING AN EFFECTIVE WRITER

Week4/Journal writing1

That day was embedded for ever in my recollection. It was in the summer, in those far-off days of the childhood which were replete with something magical and unreal. I was in the kitchen smelled of grandma's pierogies. Tender streams of sun, still warm, not acquiring full strength, shone through the lacy hangings and highlighted a big blue hudrangea. I climbed up an old wooden stool, looked out the window meaning to see somebody from neighbour's children and gaped on. In June, in the summer warm morning white flakes of poplar wool, like snow-flakes, fell down slowly on the ground. The whole yard was snowed under with poplar wool.